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A Rapunzel poem by Adele Geras

Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Adele Geras, a UK writer whose work I admire greatly, sent me this beautiful Rapunzel poem. I just wish I could have included it as an epigraph in Bitter Greens!

WHITE TOWER

          There were stairs
               on the way up.
               I am sure of it.
 
               I can see the wall.
               Beyond the wall
               there must be something,
               but I cannot say
               exactly what it is.
 
               There was a door
               on the way in.
               I am sure of it,
 
               but thorn trees have grown
               as quick as weeds
               and covered it.
 
               The stairs have melted.
               Your footsteps, as you left,
               turned them to wax,
               which has blocked the stairwell
               and set in every crevice.
 
               You have made the tower
               your particular candle.
               Presently,
               my hair will flare to gold.
 
               There were other places
               before this room.
               I am sure of it.
 

'Rapunzel' drawing by Isobel Lilian Gloag


Adele Geras has written a fresh and inventive retake on Rapunzel called The Tower Room, which is set in a 1960s English girls’ school. The story draws upon the key motifs of the fairytale - the tower, illicit love, an angry mother-figure - while still telling a compelling coming-of-age story. 

Adele Geras's website



Creating Secondary Worlds

Wednesday, May 09, 2012

One of the great pleasures of writing a fantasy novel is creating the secondary world in which your story will inhabit. 



In the contemporary fiction genre, the writer knows the religious, political, historical, and cultural background of the society already 

A fantasy writer must construct the society from the very foundations.

E.M. Forster wrote in ‘Aspects Of the Novel’, that ‘What does fantasy ask of us? It asks us to pay something extra. It compels ask to make an adjustment that is different to an adjustment require by a work of art, to an additional adjustment. The other novelists say, “here is something that might occur in your lives”, the fantasist  “Here is something that could not occur.” 


The extra coin that E.M. Forster says must be paid by the reader of a work of fantasy is the suspension of disbelief. 

By agreeing to put aside our inherent scepticism, we are opening the doors of our imagination and inviting in beauty, terror, strangeness, the marvellous and the miraculous. We are allowing ourselves to wonder whether the world may not be a different place to what we believe it to be. This can be an uncomfortable experience, no doubt, but also a liberating one.

The extra coin that a writer of fantasy must pay is the painful stretching of their own imaginations and knowledge. A good writer of fantasy is one which constructs their impossible world with great care. 

They must know the spiritual beliefs of their people, and the tension which inevitably arise between those who believe differently. 

They must know the history, the language, the culture, the landscape, the flora and fauna – and it is not enough to call a rat a “sleghg”, or some other unpronounceable made-up name! 

Nor is it enough just to give your characters a sword and a cloak and a horse and a dragon to fight, and think that your work is done. Especially if your hero says ‘OK’ and ‘See ya later.’


Readers of fantasy are usually avid readers with excellent educations. When you have read a thousand fantasy books, the ones you remember are the ones which enter into your dreams and inhabit your waking life, ones which seem more real than your own life, ones which give you a language to express your own inexpressible fears and desires. 
In order to create this vividness, this intensity of feeling in the reader, a writer must spend the time getting to know their created world as well, if not better, than the world in which we all live. 

How they would speak, what clothes do they wear, have they discovered how to magnetise lodestones yet, and do they knew the recipe for gunpowder?


Is the world you are creating set on our planet in the past, or is it set on our planet as it may have been if things had happened differently, or is it on a different planet altogether? 

Who holds the power in your created world? Who desires to?

What is the primary source of money? 

What do people eat for breakfast?

What kind of underwear do they wear?

What do people say when they hammer their thumb instead of the nail? 

What god do they call to in their despair?

The sorts of questions you can ask yourself when constructing a fantasy world are endless, and endlessly fascinating. Much of it may not find its way into the narrative, for after all, you are not writing a traveller’s guidebook, but a story. 

It is the story which will compel your reader’s interest. Yet if you do not do the ground-work, you will not be able to understand what forces drive your characters, and it is your characters that make the story come alive. 


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